March 15, 2010

The Elder's Thrall

4 comments:

  1. I don't think I've ever seen a TG cap like this before, and at first I nearly jumped out of my chair! Then I started reading...and I loved this! Using the supernatural creature really expands what you can do with this kind of cap, and makes the poor victim seem *so* helpless. The mind control, the induced submission, the TG itself - all great! And you finished it off so well with the circular ending - more falling prey to the trap, the existing prey falling ever deeper. Amazing!

    Sorry to ramble. I just *really* like this one. :) Great work!

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  2. Thanks mirage! It was a lucky find to come across such an odd image and it really inspired me to do something different with it. I like how it turned out and I'm very glad you liked it too!

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  3. Fun Fact: I probably went through more revisions of this cap than I usually do. The overall story stayed pretty much the same throughout but there was a much darker version, a really confusing version, and an ever wordier version that eventually got edited down to the final cap. :)

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  4. Wow, that was awesome. The quality of the image along with the story were both great. Keep up the good work!

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